Hello, your writing looks fine to me. But they say we’re our own worst critic, so I get it. I have to be in that mode to write or else it will be terrible on my end as well. They say a minor setback for a major comeback. Maybe the timing just wasn’t right, and that’s okay too. I wanted to go to school for phlebotomy as well but of course, never got around to it. In time you’ll be a nurse and those setbacks will be a thing of the past. Good luck.